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Well done for posting your production onto your blog. 1) Your fade to black and 1.30 is too long, make this shorter and use a cross fade for the eye opening. 2) Turn up the sound and 3) Add a title as you cut to black at the end ....something like ...two weeks.... earlier to strongly indicate the opening to the film. 4) Where you use titles for the actors, avoid And....just the actor's name.Will have a final look at school in our first lesson so don't forget your lap top.Thanks James.
Well done for posting your production onto your blog.
ReplyDelete1) Your fade to black and 1.30 is too long, make this shorter and use a cross fade for the eye opening.
2) Turn up the sound and
3) Add a title as you cut to black at the end ....something like ...two weeks.... earlier to strongly indicate the opening to the film.
4) Where you use titles for the actors, avoid And....just the actor's name.
Will have a final look at school in our first lesson so don't forget your lap top.
Thanks James.