You have proficiently contrasted and compared these two texts articulately and intelligently; you have consistently referenced examples (to include screen) and have developed your ideas.
Target:
1) Check for carelessness with capital letters.
2) Of course these texts represent two different mediums, "LA Confidential! is a film and "LA Noire" is a computer game.
3) Add to your labels: G321 Thriller Research and G321 Evaluation.
I like the way you have done some research and introduced your case study with institutional/background information.
This is a promising start to the research required for your main task, which is constructing the opening to a new thriller film. Could you please file under G321 Thriller Research.
James all your case studies should be under G321 Thriller Research. Could you please sort this out without delay. G321 Planning is for story boards, shot lists etc.
You have proficiently contrasted and compared these two texts articulately and intelligently; you have consistently referenced examples (to include screen) and have developed your ideas.
ReplyDeleteTarget:
1) Check for carelessness with capital letters.
2) Of course these texts represent two different mediums, "LA Confidential! is a film and "LA Noire" is a computer game.
3) Add to your labels: G321 Thriller Research and G321 Evaluation.
I like the way you have done some research and introduced your case study with institutional/background information.
This is a promising start to the research required for your main task, which is constructing the opening to a new thriller film. Could you please file under G321 Thriller Research.
James all your case studies should be under G321 Thriller Research. Could you please sort this out without delay. G321 Planning is for story boards, shot lists etc.
ReplyDeletePost your summer task under G321 Thriller Research without delay. Thanks James.
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